Contrasts of my sisters
I have two sisters. One is older then me, the other is younger. I love them both even they are absolutly different.
My oldest sister is a big-sized woman. The younger sister is skiny, and does everything she can to prevent gaining weight. You can easily guess which one likes to eat tasty food and does it in a big quantity. And which one likes fashion and spends all of her time in the beauty salons.
Also, you don't need to be very smart to figure out which one spends all their time at home and who goes out to performances and dancing. But I think all of that depends on age and status. My oldest sister is thirty five and she has two children while my youngest sister is twenty one and single.
My sisters are two opposites, but it is really fun to spend time with them together.
posted by Veronika @ 7:28 PM
1 Comments:
At 7:08 AM,
John said…
Your sisters are very different in shape and in interests. It must have been interesting growing up with them. Here are a couple of things to work on. This is a comma splice:"One is older then me, the other is younger." You can put a semi-colon where you have the comma: "One is older than me; the other is younger." Notice that the correct contrast word is than. Also, in this sentence, "I love them both even they are absolutly different", even is not a subordinate conjunction. You can use even though or even if.
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